Wow, Jill. That last sentence pulled at my heartstrings. Stunning writing 🤍 You have the perfect voice for your words xx (Sometimes I hear a narration and think, I never thought that voice would sound like that. I always smile, though. I love narration! I wish I were that brave. Can't stand my voice. I'd never get it published 🤭)
Jill, the language used here feels very much like walking on eggshells and dancing along the margins of the issue at heart. I feel unsettled from just reading it, which is what it often feels like when we try diverting ourselves away from our grief.
You have a knack for capturing a tone as well as conveying feelings through your poetry.
Wow, Jill. That last sentence pulled at my heartstrings. Stunning writing 🤍 You have the perfect voice for your words xx (Sometimes I hear a narration and think, I never thought that voice would sound like that. I always smile, though. I love narration! I wish I were that brave. Can't stand my voice. I'd never get it published 🤭)
I'm so touched, Marcia. Thank you!!
Oh, Jill. This is so so touching and you have the perfect reading voice!
Weeeee yay ty!!
I love this so much, Jill, especially the ending! And what a wonderful treat to hear your voice.
Awwww thank you so much, Nancy 🥰
It's always loss to not witness and see beauty in its true form because we just could not get past our grief, pain and expectations...
Your writing and your words blow Me away every time Jill 😊
Thank you so much, Ral 🙏
I love the voiceover! A great, refreshing way to take in your poetry.
Just when I thought your poetry could not affect more, I am just blown away. Such an amazing voice for reading.
Ohhh my well--thank you!!
A voiceover!! What a wonderful surprise. 🖤
Aww-- I was hoping to evoke a response from you just like that! Yes I'm going to start adding them!
Jill, the language used here feels very much like walking on eggshells and dancing along the margins of the issue at heart. I feel unsettled from just reading it, which is what it often feels like when we try diverting ourselves away from our grief.
You have a knack for capturing a tone as well as conveying feelings through your poetry.